The girl.

[Tajik]

"Come in my child" The tall and dark man said, While he hid in the shadows, his long coat and because his collars were popped up his face was difficult to see.
"Please go and sit on that leather chair". The girl was frightened, she feared for her life. Obeying the older man she sat down on the cold dark leather chair. "Excuse me while i search for my.....Tools." One could describe the way he smiled as a friendly grin or an evil wicked smile that only a true saddist could make. "Please don't hurt me" The girl said "I'm sure my mom is worrying, she loves me so much !" The man returned. Holding in one hand a long round object and in the other something that could be easily mistaken with a injection needle. "This won't hurt a bit" he said. "It'll be over before you know it"
The girl tried to scream, but all that exited her mouth was a puff of air. She lay there, in the dark leather seat, unable to scream or to make any noise. She was frightened only as someone that's desperate for her life could be afraid.







Then the dentist switched on the light. Administered just the right amount of aneastetic and drilled the decaying tooth of the little girl. She didn't feel a thing, just as he said.

"Thanks mister!" The girl said "You're the greatest dentist ever, I didn't feel a thing"
"That's my job" The dentist replied with a friendly smile.

And the girl lived a happy life without tooth decay.

[Ja nie]

fuck im a sicko

[Trashy Rashy]

I fapped to the first part. =/

[A Sassy Sassin]

loooooooooool

That's all i can say :/

[Trashy Rashy]

Mod Note: Inappropriate. -Zanko

[Zanko]

Wasn't expecting that at all, kept me on my toes.
Maybe a sequel?

[Trashy Rashy]

What the hell is wrong with that?

[Zanko]

I think you should be asking 'what wasn't wrong with that?'
PM me if you want to discuss it further.

[Camioneto]

And the girl lived a happy life without tooth decay.

ROFL, that part made me laught donno why XD

[Eliza Brown]

Mr. Tajik, I enjoyed your story, it carries an interesting idea closely resembling a trivia. However keep in mind that it is as much important to maintain a correct English language as the story, so do not hesitate to revise your stories as many times as you can.

[Morthanius]

Ms. Eliza Brown, I feel an urge to point out to you the general awkwardness of the last sentence in your reply, and contrived nature of it's pomp.

Yours,
Mr. Morthanius Esq.

[acejawkola]

Mr. Tajik, I enjoyed your story, it carries an interesting idea closely resembling a trivia. However keep in mind that it is as much important to maintain a correct English language as the story, so do not hesitate to revise your stories as many times as you can.

I pooped out this story in 5 minutes and i couldn't care less about any grammar mistakes or whatever.

[Lukas0r]

why is Tajik deleted? did i miss something?


good story tho